Am I Missing Something Poem by Sean Joyce

Am I Missing Something

Rating: 5.0


Where has everyone gone?
I turned around and
everybody’s gone
Hello
'anybody there?

I don’t like it
This is not fun
It’s not fun anymore
It's not just
that they’re gone
Its not so much
that I’m alone

Its more the not knowing
the not being sure
if, you know

if they’re still there
and I’m the one
that’s not
hello

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edna Javelosa 15 June 2007

hello...nice meditation of being alone..expressed outwardly..sometimes we do wonder where everyone has gone...nice piece..

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Sean Joyce

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Galway, Ireland
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