Allen Steble

Rookie - 0 Points (20/04/1987)

(Always for eachother)


I can see you
you can see me
and what we see
amazingly
is eachother

I can hear you
you can hear me
and what we hear
is ever so clear
we hear eachother

I can smell you
you can smell me
and what we smell
in a nutshell
is eachother

I can taste you
you can taste me
and what we taste
is oh so tasty
we taste eachother

I can feel you
you can feel me
and what we feel
is ever so real
we feel eachother

I think about you
you think about me
and what we think about
is the great times
we spend together

I love you
you love me
and what we love
and what we hold
is always eachother

Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, October 21, 2009

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Comments about this poem ((Always for eachother) by Allen Steble )

  • Gold Star - 6,710 Points Amitava Sur (9/10/2014 9:42:00 PM)

    An intense and real expression of an unbiased true love, .... an amazing write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Tanya Gupta (4/8/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    no words for your writing.........mr.steble.
    its just the magic of a great poet and surely his words...
    i always loved reading you and will keep loving it...........

    regards,
    tanya gupta. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (4/6/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    ........true love beaks through boundaries of secrecy..............lovely write.......
    .I invite you to read my- The rosy lay..plzz do comment your views..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,568 Points * Sunprincess * (3/19/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    .....this is like someone asked you what is true love....this is being committed to each other...and a great write... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (1/9/2014 12:01:00 PM)

    aMAZING..so true having each other for each other together! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/19/2013 1:54:00 AM)

    simple and beautiful as the true love that doesn't have to hide anything from each other.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 21 Points Suman Kumar Das (11/23/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    it touched my heart..... beautifully worded! Superb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    checkout mine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Douglas Mcclarty (11/11/2013 11:10:00 AM)

    Love it. The day after Seamus Heaney sadly died I started to write some poems I am trying to establish a style. I really enjoyed this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Oscar Robles (6/21/2013 1:22:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, a style like mine. Very nice! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,923 Points Patricia Grantham (6/15/2013 7:57:00 PM)

    A nice read Allen. Simple and
    sweet. A love that is pure and true.
    Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (5/26/2013 7:22:00 PM)

    to be for each other is to love completely. a very nice worded poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Nasteha Liban (5/18/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    This is beautiful Allen! Simple and amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/14/2013 12:57:00 AM)

    cute love poem............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie surya . (6/24/2009 7:20:00 PM)

    well, beautifully expressed.
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asia Joseph (1/7/2009 8:48:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, gets the point across simplicity is key here, there is no drama with love, or at least there shouldnt be.....nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nichola Okoro (1/7/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    It's a nice poem.I 've not really taken pains to analyse it but it's too siplistic for me and the should be stretched. I don't believe the arrangement style of modern poets. I think poets should sit up in order that poetry doesn't lose its value. Allen, you've done anice job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Gale (12/19/2008 12:50:00 AM)

    Great poem here. I hadda givvtta ten here Kind Sir. I bet Krystal is pleased!

    God bless all poets alive or dead-MJG. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie pied piper (12/19/2008 12:23:00 AM)

    This is a beautifully written piece full of love and hope. Well penned. I enjoyed reading this piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (12/17/2008 11:27:00 PM)

    I hope you gave this to Krystal this is a great and sweet poem


    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (12/16/2008 7:01:00 PM)

    =D
    Loved the choice of writing style. Very unique
    Definetly puts a smile on your face whenever you read it! =]
    It was well worth the read!
    Scale 1-10.....12! (Report) Reply

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