Always Be One To Me Poem by wabi sabi

Always Be One To Me

Rating: 5.0


Sketch a flame on a candle.

Have it up-side-down.
What do you see?

It's like a water dropp out of a cup!


Like the sketch,
I find you known to me always.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Good effort Wabi Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Mohabeer Beeharry 29 August 2013

If you had sung this poem, the sound would have been very beautiful. So much said in two words. Keep writing. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

very beautiful sketch you said so much in so less words :)

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Pheko Motaung 22 February 2012

A fine sketch of life in a few masterly written lines! This is poetry at the highest level!

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Shirin Sheikhi 14 February 2012

very beautiful portrait thank you for sharing

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