Always Poem by Sandra Feldman

Always

Rating: 5.0


I never had the love I dreamt,
Romantically, my life was spent,
Yet it was void of sentiment,
You did not feel the Love I felt.

The moments cross, the seconds wane,
I feel this intense, piercing pain,
A longing for a Look, A Touch,
That used to say, ' Love you so much! '.

And now, My Love, has come, the day,
When we must part and go our way,
There's really nothing more to say,
'I'll love you, Always', anyway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 05 January 2016

I love your true, simple, accurate, language of ordinary imageries, the wealth that forms the way of your honest words, in all your poems.

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Susan Lacovara 03 November 2013

I invite you to read Well Wishes on Wednesday, as I recognize we share similar emotions. I love the simplicity of this poem...saying, bittersweet, what the heart holds, in a whisper. Lovely...reminds me of those first love days of old...PEACE

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Marvin Brato 28 October 2013

I liked the style....profound!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 October 2013

Good rhyming metre.

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