Although...~ Poem by together forever

Although...~

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Although you may not love me,
Although you may not care,
If you shall ever need me,
You know I’ll always there.

Your heart may be taken,
Your love may not be free,
But when your heart is broken,
You can always lean on me.

I will never stop loving you,
I know because I’ve tried,
All the Oceans in the world,
Cannot hold the tears I’ve cried…

~Leslie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Heart 22 July 2009

such a sweet poem! ! itx great! ! ur a great writer.... 10+ again

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Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009

very very nice flow. i loved the way u ended this 1 too 'all the oceans in the worl cannot hold the tears ive cried' man i love that. very good.

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nice rhymes, nice form... don't hold in the tears.. cry. but only for the worthy

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