Already On Your Way Poem by Kuji soliman

Already On Your Way

Rating: 5.0


My dear friend with this innocent heart,
you have to open your eyes and make a new start...

You have no idea of what people will do to you...
Even if you don't beleive me, it's true...

I love you too much to see you cry...
You'll see soon enough why...

Now you are stubborn, and you have your own mind...
But if you listen to me, it's peace that you'll find..

But now you're going away,
i can't stop you,
you're already on your way...

(dedicated to my friend: 'Nourhane Mokhtar')

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 09 October 2009

all the teenagers are stubborn.......all...........and noone can stop them or change their mind even themselves................you won't stop your friend but you can advice her if you have an advice.........

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 23 October 2009

Hi Kuji, A narrative of truth from the mind and heart of a poet. a solid 10+++>>>>

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Vijay Menon 15 October 2009

i have liked your poem very much nicely expressed words 10

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Lubna Adel 15 October 2009

Very nice, i admire your honesty!

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Natalya Mitchell 14 October 2009

aww thats really sweat and nice. U have talent and this was a great poem

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beautiful and sincere write..well done

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