Aloud Poem by ONElia AVElar

Lovely ONe.. tis like chewing watermelon flavoured bubblegum... you can't help but work your tongue to seek the formation of the biggest bubble.. out.. then POP... loud and clear.. you do it over.. aroha xx

very nice poem, i loved it truely.

nice poem to fall back upon again and again and the more you read it aloud the more silently it pervades one's sensibility. liked it very much...

Wow, a dramatically captured state of mind with heart in it. CP

Very pretty presentation of how an ordinary occurrence can somehow become illuminated in our minds. The final 3 lines are blinding, the imagery of vapourising is superb! Love it Onelia. HG: -) xx

very nice.short and to the point.liked it.

Perhaps he is tongue tied in your presence

lapses of an eager heart... ....................................... Clever and warm poem... 10..... Tsira

Unique imagery in your first two lines alone had me engrossed, and I was right to be so..... t x

superb work................well penned