Jane Lundgren


Along The Beach - Poem by Jane Lundgren

Thick blackness strangled all other light;
As sea winds blew across the sand;
Crabs, scuttling left and right;
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Comments about Along The Beach by Jane Lundgren

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (10/3/2013 6:00:00 AM)

    Jane you have a fabulous power of expression which you have very delicately used in this poem. Loved it. Have rated your poem.

    Could I request you to read and rate my poem? I would also be delighted if you could endorse your comments on the poem.
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    Regards
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