Alone Without You Poem by Hailey Stump
Alone Without You
When you are gone
I feel alone
When you are not near
I fear I will never see you again
When you are in pain
I go insane
When you break promises
I break down in tears
You have let me feel without a dad for far to long
And you are gone
And I am done with you
So leave me alone
So I can receive my step dads love
Because your love is not interesting anymore
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4/19/2024 7:23:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like this poem but also I must add the more I read the poem I pick up a rhythm and that rhythm sets me on a downward trend. A violin can be played up(in sound) and also down(in sound) . For variation and enhancement words can be tuned to have a similar effect. The only way is up, so aim your poem in that direction. Best wishes and keep writing. Cleveland