shubham kumar


Alone on Sea


Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea
Alone i wake up on the sea
Alone i seek out for help
Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food
Alone i drink the salty water
Alone i sit in the cold
Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm
Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea
Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat
Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe
Alone, yes, alone i call out for help
Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat
Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months
Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided
Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the
Guinness World Record for survival at sea

Submitted: Monday, July 09, 2012

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  • Cherry Ann (10/11/2013 3:03:00 PM)

    I like it. It talks about being alone and then at the end it has a neat twist to it :) (Report) Reply

  • Isabella Velazco (9/17/2013 6:54:00 PM)

    that poem did not make sense i'm sorry but it did not make any type of sense try to make more sense on the list of poems alright so try to make another poem making sense and try to make more rhyming than you did right now because you did a horrible job doing that type of rhyming if you say that type of poem aloud on the stage they going to kick you out of the sage or the contest (Report) Reply

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