Alone In The Rain Poem by selcan deniz

Alone In The Rain

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Walking alone in the rain
Hiding my tears
Trying not to show
Blending the tears with the rain

Hoping things will go right
Wishing I had a way out
Or someone with love who
Could comfort me
And make all my worries
Disappear in instant

I’m alone now
Walking through the rain
Wondering why
While thoughts rush through my mind

Hoping and praying
Everything goes to plan
Yet still stressed
While the thoughts come to mind

Alone in the rain
Walking through the darkness
Looking for answers

A bright light ahead
I could see but not reach out
So close but so far
Maybe the key to my worries
And maybe the key to success

The closer I get the brighter it gets
I’m as close as I could get
Wondering whether to go or not
While I get a strain of ideas
The bright light weakens

Now I’m walking alone in the rain
Confident and strong
High goals and aims
A small smile arises on the face
While I realise this was the answer
I had been searching for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alice sunderland 15 December 2006

well - you need to know that I know bugger-all about poetry. but i gotta say i liked this loads. loved the wording. loved the story. dont 'totally get' the end - but i reckon it's all the better for that! ! its a tenner from me. al.

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Patricia Gale 14 December 2006

Full of thought... well done

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Brandi Knecht 14 December 2006

nice i like it it has induviduality

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