Alone In The Dark Poem by Jule's best

Alone In The Dark

Rating: 4.5


I am sitting alone,
In the darkness of night.
Holding up my self as tight,
I guess there something behind.
Wanna come out of my mind,
I am looking at the ground,
Trying to figure out the sound.
I am all alone in this place,
But searching for that face,
I have something to say,
But everyone is away.
As i am tired of this, wanna cry out loud,
but nothing came out of my mouth.
I am pushing up myself, As much as i am getting closer to that,
But still its far away, Difficult to discover that.
In far distance away,
someone standing on the way,
For a moment,
There was no movement.
We were looking so deeply into each others eyes,
As i tried to hide my lies.
There were so much pain,
I feel like I am in a city of heavy rain,
It seems like i am not alone,
As i see those lonely eyes,
There were No Words, No Communication,
But there were some emotions,
All of a sudden, There was a whisper,
And the moment was over.
I close my eyes, Full of Red,
In back of my head,
I am all Confused, but still i refuse,
To say that I am not alone.

Sunday, October 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
One day i was just sitting alone in my backyard, no one was there at home. so at that moment i decided to do something creative.
so it ends up in this poetry, and know its in front YOU!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Jule. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Akhtar Jawad 18 November 2014

It's a wonderful start, your first poem is rich in description and flow of words. It's a lovely description of loneliness. I rate it 10.

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Chinedu Dike 21 October 2014

A good narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Shafeeqrahman Rahman 19 October 2014

really breath taking one

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