Ruby Mostazir

Veteran Poet - 1,072 Points (dhaka)

Alone In A Million Crowd? - Poem by Ruby Mostazir

Sometimes i feel so alone in a million crowd
Sometimes i feel so empty inside
On da road;
In da crowd;
Suddenly i find myself alone..like a big cloudy sky
Then i feel to cry
Tear drop rolling down on my face,
I tried to ran away 4m da crowd!
I tried to ran away 4m all my pain!
But your face like a ocean of grief...
Take me down
Drop me inside;
Thousand i tried to forget you,
I tried to close my eyes,
Your word whispers in my ear's
Baby i can't live widout you
I will surely die....
When even i know dat; Its all over
da way we broke each others heart and said goodbye? ? ?


Comments about Alone In A Million Crowd? by Ruby Mostazir

  • Bronze Star - 2,445 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (8/25/2015 1:04:00 PM)

    But your face like a ocean of grief...
    Take me down
    Drop me inside;
    Thousand i tried to forget you,
    I tried to close my eyes,
    Your word whispers in my ear's
    Baby i can't live widout you
    I will surely die.... loneliness in the crowd. your love and your desire and finally all is gone. despair, love, rejection perhaps. all such human feelings you have brought in, in this poem. thank you very much (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 30,755 Points Valsa George (8/13/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    This is not your singular experience Ruby! Often we pass through stages of ups and down. At times we feel very lonely in life or feel very low! That's all quite natural. But we should never allow that state of mind to linger long. At the earliest, we should get out of it and come into sunshine and cheer! A very poignant write! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 778 Points Aranthabailu Ummar (8/10/2015 3:07:00 PM)

    Yeah many times I read this poem to know the truth of the love
    I wants to think how it provokes the reality of the love
    the master piece of this poem is surrounding around the love
    the crowd & road both are imitating the false love because it is already broken
    the body which subjugated such kind of love have utterly broken
    hence it tries to halt the breath. But still there is gape to turn again
    which symbolises the words like clouded, sky again the feeling of inside
    the tears after deep loses expression Tec
    the tears itself is remedy for our sorrows. Some quantity os sad will be cured by it.
    But I don't want to make too glamurous of the love
    love must be there for some extent but it is the lasting in our life.
    it is good poem
    Some thing good we can grasp from it. I love to read your works always. And also I love to write
    critics on you work. Because it feeds me so thing good

    Thanks a lot (Report) Reply

    Veteran Poet - 1,072 Points Ruby Mostazir (8/11/2015 3:06:00 AM)

    Thanks for that Ummar my friend :)

  • Gold Star - 38,318 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/1/2015 10:35:00 PM)

    Ruby it's a wonderful poem............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,318 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/1/2015 10:34:00 PM)

    Tumi ki kado?
    Tobe je akash ato brishti jhoray......
    A beautiful two liner. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,180 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/14/2013 9:24:00 PM)

    Swimming in the sea of sadness yet a significant solo of loneliness! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (10/2/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    we all have these feelings from time to time. but all is not lost. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/2/2013 1:19:00 AM)

    Its like confession with high degree of commotion but in spite of negativity the positiveness -immensity thank a lot its a philosophical poem 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 2, 2013


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