Sometimes i feel so alone in a million crowd
Sometimes i feel so empty inside
On da road;
In da crowd;
Suddenly i find myself alone..like a big cloudy sky
Then i feel to cry
Tear drop rolling down on my face,
I tried to ran away 4m da crowd!
I tried to ran away 4m all my pain!
But your face like a ocean of grief...
Take me down
Drop me inside;
Thousand i tried to forget you,
I tried to close my eyes,
Your word whispers in my ear's
Baby i can't live widout you
I will surely die....
When even i know dat; Its all over
da way we broke each others heart and said goodbye? ? ?
This is not your singular experience Ruby! Often we pass through stages of ups and down. At times we feel very lonely in life or feel very low! That's all quite natural. But we should never allow that state of mind to linger long. At the earliest, we should get out of it and come into sunshine and cheer! A very poignant write!
But your face like a ocean of grief... Take me down Drop me inside; Thousand i tried to forget you, I tried to close my eyes, Your word whispers in my ear's Baby i can't live widout you I will surely die.... loneliness in the crowd. your love and your desire and finally all is gone. despair, love, rejection perhaps. all such human feelings you have brought in, in this poem. thank you very much
Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought. Very heartfelt with strong emotions Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought. Very heartfelt with strong emotionss Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
আছে আছে সবখানে দিকে দিকে চারদিকে পরিপূর্ন আছে তবুও নেই নেই আমার কিছুই এ বেলায়; ও বেলায় এত ভিড়ে অপূর্ন আমি তুমি হীনে
It is beautiful poem on love having thrilling expression. Lovers and beloveds can't live separately is the main theme of this poem. Let me quote some lines... But your face like a ocean of grief... Take me down Drop me inside; Thousand i tried to forget you, I tried to close my eyes, Your word whispers in my ear's Baby i can't live widout you I will surely die.... Thanks for sharing this poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yeah many times I read this poem to know the truth of the love I wants to think how it provokes the reality of the love the master piece of this poem is surrounding around the love the crowd & road both are imitating the false love because it is already broken the body which subjugated such kind of love have utterly broken hence it tries to halt the breath. But still there is gape to turn again which symbolises the words like clouded, sky again the feeling of inside the tears after deep loses expression Tec the tears itself is remedy for our sorrows. Some quantity os sad will be cured by it. But I don't want to make too glamurous of the love love must be there for some extent but it is the lasting in our life. it is good poem Some thing good we can grasp from it. I love to read your works always. And also I love to write critics on you work. Because it feeds me so thing good Thanks a lot
Thanks for that Ummar my friend :)