Alone Again Poem by charlotte marie peachey

Alone Again

Rating: 4.5


give me fire,
give me wind,
forgive me father
for i have sinned.

give me water,
give me stone,
for i am now alone.

give me bars,
give me chains,
for as long as i live nothing remains.
without you my life ends,
everything feels pretend.

find your soulmate,
treat them right.
dont be late,
it doesnt have to be
love at first sight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 25 January 2010

Give me some shine, give me some rain Give me a chance to grow up once agiain U wlll surely get light. But ur rhyming should be more mature. No extra effort for rhyming, Try to maintain rhythm. That is possible. Mere rhyming without solid support of thoughts,

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Ency Bearis 12 January 2010

good write...nice to read all through.....10

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