Alone Poem by Anni chin

Alone

Rating: 5.0


i feel like I'll die alone
just like that on my own

why we're only friends
cant we stop our friend-zone

is it my fault that your not here
or is it the payback of my loan

just like that everything will be thrown? ?
like it was never known

where are the days when we had fun
the days of scary movies and the popcorn

its like everything turned to a stone
and i broke it with a dinosaur bone

i can hear my end tone
because i am and i will always be ALONE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 21 October 2012

certainly a good write i like it

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Kelly Seale 21 October 2012

Anni, I liked this piece, but my dear, you are wrong... you are not alone. Please, read my words, and you will understand this... ;) -Kelly.

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Yash Shinde 22 October 2012

loved your poem.......deep thoughts that evoke my heart are put into this poem.lovely

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Stevens Cadet 22 October 2012

Loved this one. Don't let your isolation overpower you. Let your pen be your friend

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Shivani Misra 30 October 2012

You're not alone dear. Sometimes the situations force us to feel so. But its not so. Keep up your head high and walk like there's nobody like you and never under estimate yourself. This was a nice piece. Take care.

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Hans Vr 30 October 2012

The feeling of loneliess It can be so strong And yet if we just try to count to count our remaining blessings we may never feel alone again

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John Raubenheimer 25 October 2012

I like the couplet when you just let the rhyme scheme go, with fun and popcorn... rhyming is good, but it can be a bit of a chain round a poet's neck. Well - you've made something good out of a sad experience...

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Ruwanal Liyanage 23 October 2012

great work. keep up the good work

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So Close 23 October 2012

really fantastic.... i love the lines its like everything turned to a stone and i broke it with a dinosaur bone good work! ! »so close«

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