Cierrah Smiles

Alone - Poem by Cierrah Smiles

Walking down a large hallway using all my might to keep whats left of my eyes shielded from the rest of the world,
Listen to the talk and laughter wonder if their laughing at you,
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Comments about Alone by Cierrah Smiles

  • Gold Star - 38,211 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (9/8/2014 11:58:00 PM)

    Loneliness and feeling alone in the world is a sad thing and here a beautiful poem and it is liked.. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,965 Points Kay Staley (9/8/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    It reminds me of the book Skinny by Donna Cooner. If it rhymed it would be more powerful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,956 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/8/2014 10:53:00 AM)

    it is nature's great law to get used to the loneliness. at first we may feel the loneliness and then it will become the part of our 'normal' life.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,334 Points Chinedu Dike (9/8/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Nice poem. The greatest crime against fellow man is neither HATE nor LOVE but an attitude of INDIFFERENCE. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,111 Points Bernard Snyder (9/8/2014 2:00:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Sometimes, being alone gives us a better perspective about life! Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/8/2014 1:35:00 AM)

    Loneliness perfectly expressed. Congratulations it being selected as poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Robinson (9/8/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    You are never alone if you stand by yourself (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,301 Points Leslie Philibert (9/8/2013 3:59:00 AM)

    A very brillant poem, written in perfect English... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (6/22/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    a good write. expressing loneliness. enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 49 Points Anita Sehgal (9/8/2012 2:21:00 AM)

    alone and lonely in a crowd... great share (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,578 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (8/10/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    Loaded with lonliness. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Joe Foster (5/13/2012 12:12:00 AM)

    Thats deep. nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Romeo Della Valle (12/16/2011 6:11:00 PM)

    Amazing! A deep and thought provoking write that clearly shows your great potential in the Poetry World! In order to enhance this poetic talent you must continue writing and reading other poets works so you can really develop that great potential! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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