I see depression rearing its ugly head as life hits lowest ebb. In such deplorable situations, it behoves one to steadfastly hold on to Faith because Faith keeps those that keep the Faith. A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Always wondering why we are walking down a particular path, darkness all around us. Our journeys are not ended until we walk into the infinite light being touched by the divine. A truly expressive poem offering inspiration and hope to others, yet still remaining alone. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
The poem is well formed and worded. If it is an expression of the authors’ feelings then it is perfect, but if it is an attempt to put into words the loneliness of others it might benefit from a lift or hint of something better to come? Or maybe I am just trying to be optimistic after coming out of a black period myself? ? ? ?
Kelsea Osterman, I have slightly different view, when walks a individual path one is normally alone, and one walks to journey, a journey to a destination, a destination which is light it self, therefore being in the dark is a reminder that the journey is yet not over.
You are in the early development of poetry.I would suggest you keep working at the poems you have posted, keep perfecting, it's a good therapy a great tool but poetry is to be spilled artistically, to coax the reader in, write as you wish to read.
great thoughts and emotion. i have only a few bits of constructive criticism.
you get a little too repetative with tha 'no end'
and what happened to the dude lol?
thats just me tho and i prob dont no wat im talkin about. oh well i tried =)
all in all i liked it