Ocean Myranda


Alone - Poem by Ocean Myranda

A fallen angel found on the ground,
Her broken wings folded around her,
Her halo bent and broken,
She was left to die.

She tried to help her people,
She messed up again,
Now she lays here, half dead,
Broken and so alone.

She could never hold on,
She lost everything that mattered,
Even the one she loved, left her,
A tear falls out of those blue eyes.

People walk by and stare,
Not one of them coming to help,
They watch her slowly die,
Dying to be loved, she is lonely.

The sky begins to rain,
Each drop, like acid, burns her,
Losing time, losing life,
Death is gripping her lonely hand.

This poor fallen angel,
Not even God could love,
In pain, is dying,
She cries out for mercy!

Slowly losing conciousness,
She sheds one last tear,
Saying one last prayer,
Closing her eyes, she dies alone.

The body of a fallen angel,
Found laying, lifeless, on the ground,
No one stopping to mourn for her,
She truly died a painful, lonely death.


Comments about Alone by Ocean Myranda

  • Gold Star - 26,918 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/5/2014 10:24:00 PM)

    The angel's death is sorrowful and poem is neatly expressed the feeling. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (8/31/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    very emotional and painful write good read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ocean Myranda (9/7/2011 10:20:00 PM)

    Thank you to all of you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 397 Points Indira Renganathan (10/13/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    A stray-death in the inhumane street....very well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/3/2009 1:46:00 AM)

    an imagery painted very emotional...it tells a lot of the pain and grief inside this lonely angelic death...good work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jean Dament (10/3/2009 12:05:00 AM)

    This sad poem expresses great emotion of pain & lonliness. Great job!
    I think we can all relate to this story at some time in our lives when we have felt truly alone. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem/story with us.

    Ravensong. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tharindu Atukorala (10/3/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    WOW! ! ! truly emotional! 10 +++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 2, 2009



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