Alone Poem by Lisa French

Alone

Rating: 3.7


I walk this empty world
All alone
I don’t wish for many others
I’m on my own
All I see
Is black and white
But apparently this world
Is colourful and bright
But all in my view
It’s only just me
Stuck in a place
Where I don’t feel free
How I wish for someone else
That will cure this pain
But for now
I’ll walk in vain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faye Burford 10 December 2009

so touching, i can realy see that in me aswell, your very young & tallented

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Beth Whittaker 09 January 2009

I can relate to this very well. Great poem deffinately a ten.

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Chris Newlash 31 December 2008

excellent poem.. and thanks for reading mine :)

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Kee Thampi 31 December 2008

I wish to reach moon the brave new world Where I don’t feel free How I wish for someone else That will cure this pain

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Sameer Ahmed 28 December 2008

Nice poem Lisa..........your described the feeling of being alone in a real artistic manner.........Loneliness is indeed a very melancholic state of mind but one always require some support from someone else........regards

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