(04-24-1995 / Florida)

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AlOnE...

Alone when i cut,
Alone whebn tears fall,
Alone in this hell,
Alone each day,
Alone each night,
Alone in my school,
Alone when im gone,
Alone inside my head,
Alone with a knife,
Alone with my friends,
Alone with my family,
Alone with my blood,
Alone in my head,
Alone with my sucidial thoughts
Alone when i die,
Alone when i rise,
Alone with depression,
Alone in the mall,
ALONE IN MY HELL THAT I CALL LIFE....

Submitted: Monday, December 01, 2008

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  • Teasia Ruffin (12/24/2012 9:30:00 PM)

    I love your poem. Sometimes i feel the same way.

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  • Jessee Bennett (12/11/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. Its so true to. You can tell it came from the hart. cant wait to read me.

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  • Lidia Schaffer (11/28/2012 11:54:00 AM)

    this is a very sad poem but i love it! Keep on writin more poetry because i love this one. this poem i can relate alot! ! Good job! Great poem! !

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  • Brittney Holstein (5/24/2012 12:31:00 PM)

    this is amazing. it describes how i feel everyday of my life. you are an amazing writer.,

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  • Marissa Ford (4/19/2012 12:27:00 PM)

    very powerful I know how that feels

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  • Roxy Del Mar (3/24/2012 12:13:00 AM)

    Listen to them, Chica. Been there, done that, not worth it. It helps nothing and just leaves you with scars inside and out. I don't know if you wrote this about yourself or not, but if you did, and you need somebody to talk to, I'm here for ya.

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  • Harindhar Reddy (11/6/2011 11:50:00 PM)

    Sick! Sick! sick! Life sucks for lonely looks. I appreciate the poem for jotting down the pain of loneliness for other can gain from this. Awesome write. MY I ASK LONELINESS TO GO AWAY FOR YOU LIFE? ha! ha! :) :) :) If time permits read my poem. Thank you....
    Ding-a-ling! Dingdong Bell! Singalong 'Loner is a Mourner! '

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  • Carolina Martinez (3/2/2011 9:32:00 AM)

    This poem tells how i feel its just bad da way i live in HELL! ! ! !

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  • Elie Lugo (3/13/2010 3:27:00 PM)

    Wow, this poem reminds me of myself too... it was really good. But listen to Peri Morgan, dont cut. I'm only 13 so i know im a bit young, but being depressed and sad and feeling alone is bad. and cutting only makes it worse

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  • Maria Perez (5/26/2009 2:55:00 PM)

    this poem says alot bout me

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