Alone Poem by Dan Brown

Alone

Rating: 4.2


My friends.
Where are you?
I want you.

I need you.

I want to say
Something.

When you ask what’s wrong, I say
Nothing.

When you turn away, I whisper
Everything.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth Harris 22 May 2018

That is how I am around my friends too.

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Merenwen Price 04 February 2008

awww i love this one, really good! :)

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Tamsin Burnett 21 February 2006

You just summed up my normal day to days feelings. i know your proberly sick of hearing it but your poems are great. keep at it your good.xxx

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Missy Trinity Ferrari. 08 February 2006

ok i know your getting tired of me complimenting your poems but i mean come on you say exactly what most people are thinking and its scary as how you can take thoughts and turn them into words. I love it.

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Charles Chaim Wax 20 January 2006

a poem to make every heart shudder the demon of dread rooted with no soul to whisper words of love sad effective hard to read, pain real a fine poem

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Dan Brown

Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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