Alone Poem by Harley Morriss

Alone

Rating: 4.9


am i alone....
in my room....
the walls getting smaller and smaller....
crushing me inside.....

am i alone....
in the park.....
the moonlight on my face.....
destroying my soul....

am i alone.....
in the cave....
the demons of the cave screeching......
losing my mind......

am i alone.....
in my room.....
with my knife in my wrist.....
scraching my bones......

am i alone.....
in a conner.....
with no love......
my life ticking away......

am i alone....
in hell itself.....
no friends just foes.....
taking wants left......

am i alone....
in my grave.....
to many skeletons in the closet to tell....
so much unfinished.......

THE END

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Flame6203E . 17 September 2007

harley i never knew you were such a sensitive guy now i know y your my best mate if u need help just tell me and i'll try to help and u know i can keep secrets

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Marvin Brato 25 September 2007

Most if not all have fears.... fears hunts us in all corners and in all times. Fears sometimes push people to become suicidal, make people withdraws from society, keep some in their own world feeling lonesome just what you feel now Max.. On the bright side this poem shows that man is normal... it is but normal to have fears, what is important is overcoming it to come out a winner. Most poets have fears and loners... but through their pens they are able to shared to the world the things which many have taken for granted. We are able to open minds and feeling giving inspiration and hope to other, so cheer up Ma! Thanks for sharing. Keep it up.

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foxy babii 23 January 2008

too true and too often nice nice i like it

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Shadow Girl 01 August 2011

God this is good...i hope u won't delet this one..i can totally relate to it. Fantastic, passionate write.10 SG

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 March 2010

‘…to many skeletons in the closet to tell..../so much unfinished.’ UNFINISHED …finished in mortal life …to be ‘Finished’ in heavenly Life…Who [God] is ‘Perfect Finish’ … Make us perfect finish [lower case] … Very much moving and touching poem… thanks for a paradigm change poem 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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wow dat wuz deep...but even thru all da pain// dont give up on life! -DLG

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Rose Kirby 11 April 2009

I love this, it's just incredible. It so deserves more than a pathetic number 10.

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Desiree Burdick 20 December 2008

very descriptive poem its good

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