Musfiq us shaleheen

Freshman - 923 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Alone Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen


Waves of time fall on my mind-
Alone I hear murmur of dry leaves
Still I become baffled
when I heard drifting sound of continental edge

Dark overlaid on my Shadow adult young
Silence of memories called me under dusk
You are not there, ‘O' you are not there
But Shadow pinch-hit the farthest face

No bird sings today, everybody gone through
Thee (friends) are moving with bright star
The moon lies in murky under cloud pang
You are not there, oh! You are not there

Time may be stand on impact of mystic flute
I heard of your very vicious passing,
sound of metaphysical rain-
My heart is as dry as a desert may be,
looping through time-
I am alone and alone as like as a void sky without any star

- Shaleheen,9th November,2013

Submitted: Saturday, November 09, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 08, 2014

Topic of this poem: Alone


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Time may be stand on
impact of mystic flute
I heard of your very
vicious passing,
sound of metaphysical rain
My heart is as dry as
a desert may be,
looping through time
I am alone and alone as
like as a void sky
without any star

Comments about this poem (Alone by Musfiq us shaleheen )

  • Silver Star - 3,373 Points Patricia Grantham (11/30/2013 8:22:00 AM)

    Being alone can be good and bad at times. It is good when it
    gives us the time to reflect on things in a good way. It is not so
    good when we think and ponder about the bad thing and what
    could have been. A soul stirring poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (11/22/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    I like this poem. My heart is as dry as a desert may be, '' love this saying (Report) Reply

  • Rookie James Safi (11/20/2013 1:42:00 PM)

    very well written poem. Alone a great poem. I liked it. metaphor twist with love and loneliness.
    the perception is great. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (11/16/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    great idea melt into good words and flow make this poem sounds so deep and touchy
    i can feel the pain, i can feel the suffer and also the desperation when i read it
    good poem
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/13/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Loneliness a fatal disease and those suffers like a curse Allah may save them wonderful though wrote in the topic but its better than mine A warm salute thank 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,818 Points Sallam Yassin (11/12/2013 12:08:00 PM)

    Deeply composed loneliness as (A void sky without any star)
    so deep and so touchy (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (11/11/2013 3:49:00 PM)

    Alone is a beautifully written poem I can relate to your last stanza. I heard of your passing (and I was crushed) (Report) Reply

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