Alone (2) Poem by tami alshamsi

Alone (2)

Rating: 4.2


alone wherever I go
alone whatever I do
alone all the time
alone what I should do

alone in every day
alone in every way
alone all the time
alone I am agonizing with each passing day



alone I wanna suicide
alone no one in my side
alone all the time
alone I will suicide

alone I cant sleep at night
alone I am shaking from the fright
alone all the time
alone I`m gonna end this loneliness tonight

alone I cry
alone I fail when I try
alone I lived all my life
and here I am.. alone I die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kabelo Mogosoane 24 February 2012

Alone is a place where you are you but a place no one wants to be. Love the poem

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Lidia Schaffer 07 November 2012

this poem hurts me but goes into the depth of pain that the writer is feelin, Keep your head up! ! Never solve a situation with suicide! ! Lidia

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Najibullah Amiri 12 August 2011

nice very nice when i have read i became fresh

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Jenna Bergman 06 July 2011

i know how you feel! ! ! ! !

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Destiny Waller 30 October 2012

i am so sorry im alone to i feel the same way

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Kennedy Huston 04 January 2016

I can really feel the emotion in this poem and the truth to it if that makes sense, great poem, i feel like that a lot so it is easy to relate. Try to remember the people you're close and that they care, so you don't feel so alone. That sounds really stupid and it doesn't really work all the time but: p it never hurts to try. Unless you like being alone then you know keep on doing what ever you're doing: p

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Joseph Sanchez 28 April 2014

EHH I WOULD RATHER NOT BRahahaha

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Dove M 10 February 2014

Read the poem i posted called in the end it may help.

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Milica Franchi De Luri 18 August 2013

I know how you feel. I am the same, and although it is very painful to be alone in life, there is always a hope that someday our situation will change. I love your poem

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Mia Zeglinski 21 July 2013

Yhea, Being Alone Is Hard: / I feel like that.... Sometimes I actually bring the knife to my throat, or the rope to my neck.... I never CAN do it.... I do WANT to DO IT I don't know why people make other people feel so SMALL in life.... I'm all alone... I have nobody to go to... Stay Strong! Don't end Up like Me Or Amanda Todd! -Mia

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