Alone Poem by piumi wijenayake

Alone

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Alone
Day by day I walk across the class room
Every time I pass across the class
The only glance I get is a stranger’s glance
It was not the same when you were with me

I sit in front of the classroom besides a pathetic friend
And remembers the time we spent
But it is just a memory
Today you are not there beside me

Days I spent with you were not dull
They were happy days
The world seemed to be bright and colorful
Everything seemed to be pleasant

But now it is not
Feels like yesterday
Everything went wrong
Now you are not here

I sit here alone
No one could see the tears that I shed
My heart is badly hurt
I wish you were here

But, you are not here
The sun shines brightly
But, my heart grows darker
My world becomes darker
I FEEL ALONE!

Saturday, February 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
WHEN A PERSON WHO WAS SO CLOSE LEAVES YOU WOULD FEEL ALONE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 28 May 2014

During my teen age, when I was a college student, I fell in love with a class mate, now I laugh at that laugh and the girl never knew that I loved her, I have described that love in my poem, An Innocent Love Affair. Your poem is nice and impressive but do not take it so much seriously. I think it was not love just an attraction and I hope you will forget it and may be laughing in future like me.

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Susan Lacovara 15 March 2014

You honesty is hearbreakingly felt...but do not feel you are alone. We have all had these same emotions, one time or another. Believe each day holds promise undeserving for the beauty of new friendships. I welcome you as my friend. PEACE

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Hira Akhtar 09 February 2014

ooo dear piumi don't feel alone, in this world nothing is permanent some one is coming and at the same tome someone is leaving so don't you lose heart... Poem is written nicely :) liked it hira

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Gajanan Mishra 08 February 2014

feeling of loneliness, I like it, thanks.

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