Alone Poem by simran arora

Alone

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When i smile,
i smiled along....
But when i cried,
i cried alon....

When i succeded,
i succeded along......
But when i got troubled,
i troubled alone......

When i spoke in words,
i spoke along.....
But when i spoke silently,
i spoke alone.....

When i prayed,
i prayed along.....
But when i wanted justice,
i wanted alone.....

When i rised,
i rised along....
But when i fall,
i fall alone....

When i bridge,
i bridge along....
But when i repaired it,
i repaired alone.....

When i lived,
i lived along.....
but when i existed,
i existed alone....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 21 June 2013

alone I read this poem- -good intention! ! !

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Vishal Sharma 21 June 2013

alone and alone and all alone all the days of happiness now has gone a very sentimental and heart touching poem now i frequently read you you are a talented poetess

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Jordan Sebastian 19 June 2013

We discover our self when we are alone, and here you show it in this poem. One that is passionate about others, yet none will take consideration to speaker. LOVE IT make more please.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2013

alone and all alone, thanks. good poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote.

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