Allow Me Poem by Meggie Gultiano

Allow Me



(a birthday poem for my daughter, Melanie Marie)

Allow me to listen to your heart and say
Here I am to watch and guide your step each day

When the skies of your life will be gloomy and cloudy
And your cross weighs more heavily
Allow me to embrace and give it all to me..

I will never let anybody make you cry
Maybe if i see your tears, i will be in pain and sigh

Enjoy life to the fullest, and be happy
Be blessed and be a blessing to everybody

and on your special day..allow me
to whisper to you and say.....

WE LOVE YOU....GOD BLESS YOU...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Meggie, the name Allow Me carries a beautiful theme throughout this sensitive and heartfelt poem to Melanie. You are both so blessed to have each other. From 'and on your special day allow me to whisper to me and say we love you, God bless you, Happy Birthday' a magical birthday is created as the word 'whisper' evoked a love so pure and giving. Do tell Melanie a BIG HAPPY BIRTHDAY FROM ME! love Karin

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Little Hatila ;) 09 August 2009

wow, such a sweet words, Happy Birthday to her... hope you you will always see happiness in her eyes....10 Hataw

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 August 2009

Happy Birthday Melanie, nice birthday poem for her sweetie :) Andy 10

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Ency Bearis 12 August 2009

Such a wonderful verses dedicated to your daughter...remarkable.. Happy Birthday Melanie....

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Ken E Hall 12 August 2009

A lovely tribute thru your love for your daughters birthday and with your words your proudness shines thru, some lovely lines Happy Birthday M++++++10 regards Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 30 January 2017

A wonderful gift to a lovely daughter from her great mother. What else she would aspire for? Here I am to watch and guide your step each day I will never let anybody make you cry

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2009

Allow me to listen to your heart and say Here I am to watch and guide your step each day allow me to say something and spell out my feeling to u inreal melody...oh so gifted poem with words...i loved it...10

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Nikunj Sharma 22 August 2009

touchy and passionate poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , wish her..........bless her..from my side as well....every year

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Alison Cassidy 20 August 2009

Every mother yearns to 'kiss and make it better'. Your birthday poem shares this truth and is chockablock with respect too - which the title demonstrates rather delightfully. A dignified and tender-hearted poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 20 August 2009

' Allow me' the language and tone of the narrator are moving '. Interesting how mothers share similar sentiments about their children a lovely poem that deserves a 10. When you have time, read my: A Mother's Collection of: Tissues, Bones, and Blood'- Birthday tributes to my four children.

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