Alligator Poem by Allison Unknown

Alligator

Rating: 4.1


I want to escape
This place
This life
Im tired of it all
End my life
With a blade
Stab or cut
What do I prefer
Stab slow and painful
Good option
Cut releases pain
Then die
Another good option
What shall I do
I go into my bathroom
And lock the door
I figured out what I will do
My wrists are cut
Now I just need to stab myself
Yes I am doing them both
No that is not cheating
Im about to stab myself
Then I hear a noise
Of footsteps downstairs
That just does it
I hurry up and stab myself
I pull the knife out
Covered with blood
I take a note
I had written
And put it through the knife
And stab myself again
Leaving it there
For I will not touch it
Ever again
Someone comes
And unlocks my door
They see me their
On the floor
They take the note and read it
As they will
It says
'See you later alligator'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robbie Squires 24 November 2009

that was one of the most ironic weird poems I've read in a while but it was very good. It was ironic because they kill themselves but then the notes says one of the more innocent childish phrases 'see you later, alligator.' very good job

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Sherbanu Molu 21 November 2009

you've got gud words! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! they are interesting to read esp. the last line SEE YOU LATER, ALLIGATOR.

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Shannon Hughes 19 November 2009

You are a very talented poet. Your poems are all very deep and wonderful.

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