Alliance Poem by Rachel Butler

Alliance

Rating: 3.4


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)

Oh beau respond,
Oh beau converse,
Oh beau discourse.
This brutal contempt
has my sorrow not settled the debt?

Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R. H. Peat 22 January 2012

Mutual Benefit Sweet Ann, feel my touch burn Sweet Ann, part your lips in awe Sweet Ann, understand and know this depth in my concern your sorrow hasn’t enough coal dust. © RH Peat 1/21/2012 10: 35pm Form stichic/ 5 lines In Response: Rachel Ann Butler, hugs and kisses Response to; Alliance

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Sreelekha Premjit 22 January 2012

beautiful verse, loved reading it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 January 2012

Was this because of a death?

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Unwritten Soul 30 January 2012

Trigger a good thought by this lines...nice penned Rachel_Unwritten Soul

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Danny Draper 30 January 2012

Rachel, I feel the sadness and bewiderment that a shunned heart must endue.

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Savita Tyagi 07 November 2015

So rich and beautiful in its brevity.thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 21 July 2015

The unknown Gardener will settle everything.

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Raymond Farrell 19 July 2015

It is poignant indeed but sometimes the debt cannot be settled.

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James Mclain 24 June 2015

And leaving out allows another to enter.. iip

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Sreelekha Premjit 19 February 2012

the contempt of silence, what's more hurtful than that.. beautiful dedication to your unknown gardner...

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