All U Want From Me Rite? ? 333 *i Loved U With All My Hart* I Thought U Wouldnt Break Me 'That Was So Stooopid Of Me' Poem by Emily Sleator aka Katastrophic Kyte3 NopyGirrl

All U Want From Me Rite? ? 333 *i Loved U With All My Hart* I Thought U Wouldnt Break Me 'That Was So Stooopid Of Me'

Rating: 3.4


I believed in this conception
That i could be your one and only
That vision has gone down the drain
Dont cha think? ? ?
I mock ur cleverness
Remember those nights
That u were crazy for me
N when u made me scream..............................
U coaxed me in believing
My love was unadequate
In fact i showed you so much *love*
That i was always sore, night and day
There was no equinox
For me
Night always seemed to last longer....................

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Innocent Angel* 07 February 2009

Nice poem..I liked the wors you used..maybe cuz i never heard of soemone of them..but Nice poem

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Eyan Desir 07 February 2009

interestin, its a good poem

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james Xane 26 February 2009

Not quite the poetic language, but surely shows the pain you've put in the poem. Loved this peice as I'm a sad writer as well, keep it on.

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Tom Golding 08 February 2009

You are a serious poet with something serious to say worth looking at. You should watch the language to be taken seriously. Well done!

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Pilar Killen 08 February 2009

amazing love this one =D

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Keith Hendrickson 07 February 2009

wow i expected it to be more af a joke cause of your bio and you name..lol.. but man are you talented. i guess dont judge a book by its cover...very very good piece

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Kerli Undead 07 February 2009

your 'advanced' vocab, makes the peoms more unique, like your style. ~Kerli

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