Treasure Island

hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

All the chances


You have all the chances for success
You may have opportunity for its access
You may not face crest fallen situation
You have strong nerve and clear intuition

There lie enough reasons for outcome
The success story may find the welcome
Whom do you go for and credit it with?
Will you laugh it out by showing all the teeth?

It requires tremendous courage and strength
You must be prepared to go to any length
It is secrecy of your plans that led to stunning victory
It saved you from insult and further sorry

You do anything and everything you like
you can raise your voice with blaring mike
Create artificial scarcity and compel the price hike
nothing can stop you from riding on bike

Success is not the one man’s pride moment
You can’t make it as your sole achievement
there is someone else to share it with you
Your partner has equal share and it is true

You have every right to play the life as game
You may earn good fame and name
Success and failure should be treated as same
It should not be matter of contention where from it came

We are human beings and treat it differently
We swallow the success silently
We would never like to share it with anybody
Your concern is appreciated but may not be liked by many

There should be no differentiation between man and woman
It is platform that is shared between two as common
It may be sheer coincidence that credit goes to male
There is no compulsion on male to pass it on to female

Life simply moves on with all good changes
Both the partners pull it on and manage
There is no tussle for sharing the honor
It is considered as nothing but common

We have full proof system that looks so sound
You may witness it in all the rounds
Complete joy and harmony is always found
You will have to adjust as you are loosely bound




You may heave a sigh of relief
It is your observation and strong belief
You may not like to loose the sight
Whether you may be proved wrong or right

It will go on and not change a slight
May be there at the end a light?
All goodness seemed to be in sight
will not appeal me as path right

There is always window or room to improve
You have enough time to excel and prove
You will have to remain there in the game
Though the situation might have not remained same

Submitted: Wednesday, June 30, 2010

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  • Chand Shikari (7/14/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    You have all the chances for success
    You may have opportunity for its access
    You may not face crest fallen situation... consolation for success....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kamlesh Ambalal (7/1/2010 6:35:00 AM)

    You have all the chances for success
    You may have opportunity for its access
    You may not face crest fallen situation
    You have strong nerve and clear intuition all the chances for success...10 (Report) Reply

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