All That Is Gold Poem by Stefanie Fontker

All That Is Gold



Comfortable in the mystical
Belief that by touching gold
You'll turn to gold, you smile
At those that plan your rape.
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Sink into your inadequacy,
Free yourself from your
Desperate and sad attempt
At chasing butterflies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 11 October 2011

This is such a beautiful poem love :) Almost as beautiful as you. ;) hehehehehehehhe

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Stan Petrovich 23 November 2013

I love the sense of oddity in your writing. And everything you say is always the truth...

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Adeline Foster 19 October 2011

The thoughts in this one are evocative yet lingering. Made me do a double-take. Please read mine –Clowns – Adeline

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Terence George Craddock 15 October 2011

mystical belief turns into belief reality, yet the powerless fear remains, control imposed upon us, our inadequacy to face overwhelming threat, the release from doomed desperate sad attempts, becomes butterfly flight transformation held in golden images elements of haunting appeal haunt the edges of this poem in interesting fusions :)

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Vipins Puthooran 12 October 2011

Oh, it's strong! I know the depth of these lines...Excellent write!

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Lenore Lee 11 October 2011

This poem is so unbelieveably, well like the Crimson Prince said, beautiful. I love all of your poetry.

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