All That I Have Poem by louis rams

All That I Have

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tenderly i sleep
gently i weep

softly i cry
tears i try to hide

pains in my heart
searching for a start

living a lie
love seems to die

don't seem to care
love i have to share

given a break
plans i must make

got to get back
put my life on track

all that i have
and all that i be
is what the lord
has given to me.

so i wipe away my tears
and put away the pain

thru love- i have so much to gain.

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so i wipe away my tears and put away the pain thru love- i have so much to gain.... put away the pain and donot cry.. it will put u in shame... very good write.... i like it read mine'cry not' and how are u along with miss i miss u

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getting back on track..we do have a lot to cry for..a lovely piece...read my 'losing a baby'

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Tulsi Hanumanthu 20 December 2008

Your poem projects a valuable lesson on 'Contentment' which we all need to learn. The pathos surrounding it is very touching. The structured style of the poem is one that I have been championing for over a score of years now, vers libre not being my cup of tea. Congrats and a ten for you

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Sarah Sisson 14 December 2008

how sad this one is.......

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ahhhhh this is a good one krista

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