All Of You Is Not Enough Poem by Chris G. Vaillancourt

All Of You Is Not Enough

Rating: 4.4


Help me to remove my feelings.
Drop my insecurities.
Open my soul.

Flesh to flesh.
Melodies beginning.

Songs of sin.
Songs of fire.

Love me enough to comfort me.
Wrap me eternally into a ball
and roll me
anyway you want to.

Let me love at your discretion.
In serenity.
Passion.

Falling smoke of a revolving pen
slipping casually into my heart.

Have me.
Surrender me
to every desire you've dreamed.

Let me become
every fantasy you have entertained.

Lock me into your sacred self.

Worship you.
Adore you.

Comfort and bring you to panting.

Help me to understand myself.

Rock me in terms of
swaying heat.

All of you is not enough.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shane Linville 16 October 2009

An excellent piece of work

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Ken E Hall 05 May 2014

you surrender very cleverly all from the heart...ah woman all explained by Maya Angelou puts us all in a tizz, love the title of this poem (All Of You Is Not Enough] regards and thanks

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Heather Wilkins 28 August 2013

be careful here someone will take you up on that offer. be prepared to give all. - wrap me eternally into a ball and roll me anyway you want to. that is saying a lot an excellent write

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 08 August 2013

wow, your lines are very nice you are surrendering yourself as you want to show your love to her passionately. every line is felt.

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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Have me. Surrender me to every desire you've dreamed' Rachel Ann Butler

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Chris Valiant 17 October 2009

This is so very relatable, it always seems you write not only from the soul, but from the hip and that is certainly a compliment.

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