Treasure Island

Chris G. Vaillancourt

(April 5,1959 / Canada)

All Of You Is Not Enough


Help me to remove my feelings.
Drop my insecurities.
Open my soul.

Flesh to flesh.
Melodies beginning.

Songs of sin.
Songs of fire.

Love me enough to comfort me.
Wrap me eternally into a ball
and roll me
anyway you want to.

Let me love at your discretion.
In serenity.
Passion.

Falling smoke of a revolving pen
slipping casually into my heart.

Have me.
Surrender me
to every desire you've dreamed.

Let me become
every fantasy you have entertained.

Lock me into your sacred self.

Worship you.
Adore you.

Comfort and bring you to panting.

Help me to understand myself.

Rock me in terms of
swaying heat.

All of you is not enough.

Submitted: Thursday, October 15, 2009
Edited: Monday, May 12, 2014

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  • Ken E Hall (5/5/2014 4:29:00 AM)

    you surrender very cleverly all from the heart...ah woman all explained by Maya Angelou puts us all in a tizz, love the title of this poem (All Of You Is Not Enough] regards and thanks (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/28/2013 4:36:00 PM)

    be careful here someone will take you up on that offer. be prepared to give all. - wrap me eternally into a ball and roll me anyway you want to. that is saying a lot an excellent write (Report) Reply

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/8/2013 6:46:00 AM)

    wow, your lines are very nice
    you are surrendering yourself as you want to show your love to her passionately.
    every line is felt. (Report) Reply

  • Chris Valiant (10/17/2009 4:49:00 AM)

    This is so very relatable, it always seems you write not only from the soul, but from the hip and that is certainly a compliment. (Report) Reply

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