All In Your Eyes Poem by Jinal Oswal

All In Your Eyes

Rating: 4.5


When the room was dark
From somewhere the sun shined bright

When the tap was dry
I saw the waterfall from the window

When the wind was blowing hard
I found a cave and escaped

When the earth shattered the walls
I took shelter under the table

When there was weakness
I earned strength

Let the rain come down
And wash my tears
Feel my soul
And drown my fears


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 November 2012

A lovely poem dat goes beyond d pensive touch to interest any reader. Very nice.

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Pratibha Awasthi 11 September 2012

beautiful lines: Let the rain come down And wash my tears Feel my soul And drown my fears

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 August 2012

Wow! ..sister great poem here...I like the lines..... When there was weakness I earned strenght... That's how it really should happen, when you go through hardships you learn something and learn to be brave, trials shape us to be better persons in the future...thanks for sharing such great poem. Siya_! !

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