Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 25 Points (26/05/1989)

All In Your Eyes


When the room was dark
From somewhere the sun shined bright

When the tap was dry
I saw the waterfall from the window

When the wind was blowing hard
I found a cave and escaped

When the earth shattered the walls
I took shelter under the table

When there was weakness
I earned strength

Let the rain come down
And wash my tears
Feel my soul
And drown my fears


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Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012

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Comments about this poem (All In Your Eyes by Jinal Oswal )

  • Bronze Star - 2,037 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/6/2012 1:21:00 AM)

    A lovely poem dat goes beyond d pensive touch to interest any reader. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pratibha Awasthi (9/11/2012 10:12:00 AM)

    beautiful lines:
    Let the rain come down
    And wash my tears
    Feel my soul
    And drown my fears (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (8/23/2012 10:35:00 PM)

    Wow! ..sister great poem here...I like the lines.....

    When there was weakness
    I earned strenght...

    That's how it really should happen, when you go through hardships you learn something and learn to be brave, trials shape us to be better persons in the future...thanks for sharing such great poem.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

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