All In Good Time Poem by Rachel Slimm

All In Good Time

Rating: 5.0


I feel so much pain, oh what shall I do?
I just want to spend some time with you,
Some time, just us, together again,
Oh what shall I do, I feel so much pain?

My head's in a spin my heart beats fast,
I long for the day I can see you at last,
I'm worried your pain will make you give in,
My heart beats fast my head's in a spin.

I cannot find sleep, I'll sit for a while,
Just thinking of you I can't help but smile
Then reality kicks, I can't help but weep,
I'll sit for a while, I cannot find sleep.

As time passes by these things will aright
And that happy day I'll keep in my sight,
The promise of you compels me to try,
These things will aright as time passes by.

(06/08/07)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 28 March 2008

You have it all figured out my friend.........'all in good time.' Excellent. Thanks.

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Toni O'neill 13 August 2007

This is good I like; o)

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Karen Clements 07 August 2007

This is heart felt stuff Rachel. I know things will work out for you, keep going. Love Karen xx

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Rachel Slimm

Rachel Slimm

Hayle, Cornwall
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