All I Wanted A Partner Poem by sekharan pookkat

All I Wanted A Partner

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All I wanted a Partner
To share my feelings and emotions
Then I choose you from hundred thousands
And made you my friend.

On those days I was thrilled to share
My desires, emotions and feelings
Frequently continuously and eloquently
Without shame or shyness.

Nothing worried us
Other than over lovely words
And drowned in that pool of mist
And recognized we are inseparable.

Our nights were sleepless
Days were filled with nightmare
Day and night and night and day
All thoughts were circled on my partner

Drowsy eyes revealed
the stories of the young partners
To see, to hear and to smell
And to submit each other.

Longed and desired like any one
I too drowned in that glorious days
And my mind murmured
You cant continue with this broken heart.

Clouds became black instead of blue
To separate rain drops
wind blew fiercely
Followed by lightning and thunder

Leaves separated from its branches
Branches separated from the trees
And my thoughts separated from my mind
About the partner all I wanted.

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I lost a friend whom I shared my feelings and poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lydia Monet 11 June 2014

Beautiful, sensuous and sad! :) Keep it up!

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 19 May 2014

Just remember, life is a school room, nothing is bad, but nothing is good either, all are lessons in life. We are not here to find one person and be happy forever, because that would be stagnation. We have to go on, meet others and others and definitely learn the best from them and give our best to them. Possibly strenghten and help them to more happiness and self confidence. This is why we must be well and healthy and not to dwell on problems and sickness constantly, because that is pulling the other down. Be always, wise, strong and do everything with enthusiasm.

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Colleen Courtney 13 May 2014

Love this poem. Love often makes us feel like we don't know if we're coming or gong. Have added to my favorites list! Nicely done!

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Sekharan Pookkat 17 May 2015

Leaves falls from trees and our thoughts from our mind

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