All I Want Poem by Brittney Miller

All I Want

Rating: 4.5


your hands bushes over mine
your eyes capture my soul
your stories entertain my mind
your smile takes my heart
your everything is all I want

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G. Murdock 30 December 2009

There's a typo in the first line which distracts from the simplistic exposition of your poem. Otherwise good.

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Adens Kamwi 30 December 2009

short but ever so sweet lovely

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C. P. Sharma 27 December 2009

Sublime divine love. CP

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