Sara Panicali

Rookie - 10 Points (august 28 1990)

All I Think About Poem by Sara Panicali


with you not in my life
I'm losing my mind
more and more everyday

I think how we used to lay at night
holding each other so close
talking about forever
and no matter what happens
we would be there for each other
through good and bad

Everyday I think
about the great times we shared
the connection we had, couldn't get any better
and the times we've helped each other through

Now, all that seems so far away
without you,
everyday that goes by
there's not a time I don't think of ending my own life

Submitted: Tuesday, November 01, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, November 22, 2011

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Comments about this poem (All I Think About by Sara Panicali )

  • Rookie - 112 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (1/16/2012 12:47:00 PM)

    Your feelings and emotions have brought a genuine writing. Sara, please treasure your memories, keep being strong and determined to pursue your brighter days!
    All the best to you! Keep sharing your threads. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 180 Points June Smithster (11/6/2011 2:11:00 PM)

    eye have been depressed for many years
    the mind plays tricks
    the girl refused my gift

    but when eye think harder
    eye remember she took
    the cookies those eye brought her
    from my Mother (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,153 Points Kevin Patrick (11/4/2011 8:15:00 PM)

    I agree with Abdallah any person who does not take the time or consideration to reciprocate what you give to them is not worth your attention, never think about killing yourself for someone else. Im glad yuo dont because it allows you to write these nice naratives. Congrats Sara 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 100 Points Abdallah Gamal (11/3/2011 6:46:00 PM)

    Although it seems so sad but it's magnificent. You love him, so if he doesn't share you the same emotion, then he doesn't deserve you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tempest Juliet (11/2/2011 10:18:00 PM)

    So sad, and very meaningful. Good job, Sara! Keep writing.

    t. (Report) Reply

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