All Alone! ! ! Poem by Chitresh Jhawar
All Alone! ! !
I sit in my living room with my cell
my fingers pressing its buttons but they always fail
to search a friend to whom I should call
but my bad luck, every time from the sofa i fall.
I can’t find any number except 911
no one to call, there is none.
Then I realize, I’m friendless
all alone in this mess.
I sit in my study room, which is a little shorter
no one to ask for a glass of milk or water
nobody to say, 'it’s too late, take a break
close the books and keep them in the rake'
no one to put on me my blanket and say good night
no one to kiss my forehead, no one to fight
nobody to say good morning and give breakfast
I'm living all alone here and I'll die alone here at last.
I'm all alone as a cloud
no one to accompany me in this crowd
I talk to my brain and fight with it
love, smile, relations, care, are all bullshit
then I sit for my lunch on the dining table
no one to tell me to pass the bowl and I giggle
on myself that I don't have any one to care
is it because I did the same to others? but I never dared!
I solve the charade; no one to help
no one to chat, I always yelp
then I thought, who will cremate me
and in its thinking I died!
I forgot that I'm a spook living a sinful life
all because I killed myself, I'm suffering this grief
better to die and live alone than to be alone living
life is all what you make it, think it and write it before your killing...
Hmm... its a nice poem, if we ignore the technical errors(i sit 'beside' my living room) and the monotony of having the same idea to expressed in every paragraph. But beyond that it is something can acutely connect to when loneliness sets in my life... it captures the mood of being unwanted very well.
i sit besides my living room with my cell my fingers rubbing its button but they always fail to search a friend to which i should call but my bad luck, everytime from the sofa i fall. i cant find any no. except 911 no one to call, there is none. then i realises i'm friendless all alone in this mess.....one should beguided by thought tht you are al aloneinthis world adn should carve out the path for self.... it is nice poems to read.....10 read mine you go all alone....yes yes yes..yes to to
This is really a pitiable case, where none is there except GDD to attend this young one
very 'finely' writtn with vry minute details. i lv d way u present it. i undrstand...it do happns smetyms...specially at d tym f exams! !
Full of emotion, so sad. Loneliness in itself is a killer. Pray for every void to be filled..with love! ; D
Awwww...bless, i will be your friend, such a sad poem, very good,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 8:57:09 PM # 1.0.0.1119
well well it was a really emotional poem.....but remember the creator is always with u......you have lost the track of life.......call him he will hear you, help yourself he will help you twice.......but only you need to call him.......god given life to enjoy and he knew that if he send all people together they will feel loneness if he takes someone a way one day......so alone he send and alone with him you live........call him he will hear you...................i wont say im here for u because i believe we are not alone...thanks for sharing your feelings