Alive Poem by Constantinos Grigoriadis

Alive

Rating: 4.9


I had close my suitcase and i looked at this.
There, was a part of my life.
I let a tear.
I knew the past was over,
the futur was unknown
and the present was here.
I heard my breath.
I smiled.
I was alive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter Stavropoulos 11 June 2007

Excellent poem. I liked it very much. The use of the suitcase imagery is brilliant and is what makes the poem stay in the mind.

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Madly In Love 25 April 2007

Oh wow this is such an amazing poem Constantin i love it u have a way with words

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Cece Lamberts 11 April 2007

Nice work, Constantin. I like the way you write 'the past is over, the future is unknown, the present is here.' Why worry about the past-it's over, why worry about the future-it's unknown, let's live in the present, here and now! Take care, CeCe

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Pia Andersson 07 April 2007

And I am so happy that you are..we need to be reminded how precious life is and you are doing it in an excellent way Wishing you a joyful day and a Happy Easter! Pia

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