Kevin Patrick

Silver Star - 4,048 Points (Taurus / Ontario)

Alienation (Haiku) - Poem by Kevin Patrick

Becomes the soul's cremation
Collapsed harmony

Comments about Alienation (Haiku) by Kevin Patrick

  • Rookie - 203 Points Ronn Michael Salinas (1/10/2013 8:55:00 PM)

    Collapsed harmony... how about Harmony collapsed? Just a suggestion. Cheers! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (1/6/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    Short and sweet and so true. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 5, 2013

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