Musfiq us shaleheen

Bronze Star - 2,140 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Alienation - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Scattered cloud flying over the mountain
Sometimes threatened by the horn and comb
Changes direction creates abnormal dimension
A shadow stripe forms within the sky

A hate lies within lie reminds untold hypocrisy
I never go there again but shadow stripes born
Become darker to darkest with a residue of anger
I fight against odds and evils which lie under showcase

An Aerosol kills bugs but love returns hate

-Shaleheen 16th February,2013, Dhaka

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Poet's Notes about The Poem

An Aerosol kills bugs but love returns hate

Comments about Alienation by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Gold Star - 9,939 Points Hazel Durham (3/11/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    A very deep and complex poem, great write! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Madina Morris (3/7/2013 5:01:00 PM)

    ...You always seem to amaze me, but i really shouldn't be surprise. When i think its impossible, you yourself become a better writer :) nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (2/19/2013 11:21:00 AM)

    how true but well put by a great writer, thank you for sharing sir (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014

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