Alienation Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

Alienation

Rating: 3.8


Scattered cloud
flying over the mountain
Sometimes threatened by
the horn and comb
Changes direction creates
an abnormal dimension
A shadow stripe
forms within the sky

A hate lies within lie
reminds untold hypocrisy
I never go there again but
shadow stripes born
Become darker to darkest with
a residue of anger
I fight against odds and evils
which lie under showcase

An Aerosol kills bugs but
Love returns hate

-@Shaleheen 16th February,2013, Dhaka

Saturday, February 16, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
An Aerosol kills bugs but love returns hate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 11 March 2013

A very deep and complex poem, great write!

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Madina Morris 07 March 2013

...You always seem to amaze me, but i really shouldn't be surprise. When i think its impossible, you yourself become a better writer :) nice work.

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Payal Parande 19 February 2013

how true but well put by a great writer, thank you for sharing sir

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