~alice~ Poem by E Nigma

~alice~

Rating: 5.0


The girl had a golden street gun
Keen sight with a level mean streak
Rabbits be warned, she is a killer
The karrots she carries hold gleam

You could say that Alice was a wanderer
Almost lost within her wondering
Found out through her meandering
She said anything could have meaning

Profound in what you call absurd
Seemingly simple, her totality
Her looks a fatal actuality
Dug more graves then you've ever seen

Don't mistake her calm for some carelessness
Carefree but concise through her connection
She voiced love for her condition
All I have left is her memory

Friday, October 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Thinking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 23 October 2014

The name ALICE immediately brought Lewis Carroll's character to mind but she was an INNOCENT PLAYER and this one is definitely NOT. THIS Alice has accumulated a lot of bad karma. I like the last three stanzas which take us away from Alice as killer by emphasizing a three-fold role - WANDER/WONDER/MEANDER. It's too early to say an Alice doing these three things is saveable but at least as the last line has it - her being has acquired meaning whereas before her violence was the worst kind - unprovoked and unfocused.

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Kevin Patrick 21 October 2014

The girl had a golden street gun She sounds like she was your little slice of heroin, a girl who is more then a girl, but the untapped potential of the love within your heart. I think we all got our Alice somewhere, I've left mine in the closet.

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