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Alert deer -

Two young deer feed near,
Coated in thick dirt color,
Feeding on flourishing grass,
So green it hurts to look at.
Alert eyes, never relaxing,
Even if I intend no harm
Big legs will send them racing.
Movement - their alarm.

Submitted: Monday, October 19, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, November 11, 2009


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  • Patti Masterman (10/19/2009 7:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful; I could see the nervous deer so clearly..Nature's creatures do depend on unending alertness to stay alive. It might seem to us that it would be wearing; but that's why it's instinct; probably requiring much less to maintain that way.

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