Aldin Poem by Jesyca Noonan

Aldin

Rating: 5.0


His body like heaven
his smile a haven

Face so bright
he is the light

My crush from afar
he shines as bright as the midnight star

Oh could this feeling possibly be love?
How could it, love is mutual this is not.

When he looks my direction I can't help but smile.
When he speaks I can't stand the pleasant sensation.

Oh, how I wish he knew how I felt for him.
My love my perfect Aldin.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Justin Unanue 14 October 2009

I hate one sided loves, because I've been in too many. Great poem.8/10

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Eyan Desir 07 October 2009

'Yeah give him guy a kiss Good write

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awesome poem.. nice rhythm with some nicely masked rhymes.

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Jesyca Noonan

Jesyca Noonan

St. Louis MO
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