Alchoholic Poem by mithilesh yadav

Mithilesh, I've read a few of your poems, and see that you use a lot of dots [''............']' everywhere. I think you'd better avoid them. Your wording show its meaning effortlessly, even without them. Be sure. Take care

Why in those dusty bars don't ever occurs a communal war ……. While the temples and mosque experiences every weekend such war.... A very true lines you have included......wonderful poem.....amazingly narrated.....at bar they drink that thing which is loved by every man.....and in any religious place they used to prove their religion superior than other which is totally a false thought....... :) every religion is superior in itself and people should respect every religion :)

बहुत सुंदर, मिथिलेश जी. आपकी कविता पढ़ कर मुझे 'मधुशाला' की यह पंक्तियाँ याद आ गयी. धन्यवाद. मुसलमान औ' हिन्दू है दो.. एक मगर उनका प्याला, एक मगर उनका मदिरालय..एक मगर उनकी हाला.. दोनों रहते एक न जब तक मस्जिद-मन्दिर में जाते, बैर बढ़ाते मस्जिद मन्दिर मेल कराती मधुशाला..!