Indira Renganathan


Alankar(Decor) -146


Their Love(Wreathed Octave)

Wreathed poetry is simply a natural blending of English poetry
with the Celtic Welsh which uses an internal rhyme scheme
with an external one and gives a couplet scheme of:
x. x. x. x. x. x. x. a.
x. a. x. x. x. x. x. b.
the internal rhyme can be anywhere in the first part of second line
and can be a repeat word rather than a rhyme.
It was later that poets saw the possibilities and
created the octave with a rhyme scheme of:
x. x. x. x. x. x. x. a.
x. a. x. x. x. x. x. b.
x. b. x. x. x. x. x. a.
x. a. x. x. x. x. x. b.
x. b. x. x. x. x. x. c.
x. c. x. x. x. x. x. d.
x. d. x. x. x. x. x. c.
x. c. x. x. x. x. x. d.

Their Love

Breeze curls on their love silvery
Silvery moon flashes on feels
Hushed pool feels a hushed reverie
Their reverie it is that peals
Now their peals eastward raise the sun
Sun in their grip of love aflame
Inflames.He and she and their fun
Run rolling aside none to blame

Submitted: Tuesday, May 07, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 18, 2013
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