Treasure Island

Indira Renganathan


Alankar(Decor) -142


Promissory Route(Silva de consonantes)

Silva de consonantes, the defining features are:
stanzaic, any number of couplets.
syllabic, alternating 7-11 syllabic lines.7-11 7-11 7-11 7-11 7-11 etc.
rhymed, consonant-full rhyme aabbccdd etc.

Promissory Route

When the season turned rainy
She wished to wake only when sun turned shiny

She slept and woke up bit late
As the sun was blinded and woke up late

Rains flooded around in dark
She thought of gone sun again and slept back stark

Sun never seemed to light though
She got up with a stirred heart with painful throe

Sun however did come next
Promising for a fresh season with new text

Cheated she rose up to sun
Went his way, burnt herself, paid off his run

Submitted: Tuesday, April 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, April 16, 2013

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