~ Al Fresco Imagery ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Al Fresco Imagery ~

Rating: 4.3


~ Al Fresco Imagery ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 18,2010

Get lost in
Soul sanctuary
Feel in-built finery
Immerse immix with
Al fresco imagery
Dwindle dope all drudgery.

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Glossary: With humility glossary given for what I tried to express.

Al fresco [Italian] ~ In the open air

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Celestial message/painting/etching/engraving/sculpting…very economic in words but extended easel with all colors…fantastic…true/tuned vibe caught… 10++ dr.sakti

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Marina Gasbey 01 August 2010

Very expressive! I love your use of many different languages in your poetry, it is very literate! I love the line 'Get lost in soul sanctuary' It is very profound! Thanks so much for sharing... Marina Gasbey...

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Marieta Maglas 04 August 2010

A lovely and deep write fascinating me as a reader ...many thanks for sharing...Mari

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David Beckham 27 August 2010

A real hard look at the inner workings of self, is essential. As they say charity begins at home. Nice poetry thanks for sharing

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Jenny Gordon 08 September 2010

Very nice. Rather simple on the surface, but subtle deeper aim. I like it very well.

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Adeline Foster 07 December 2011

What and whose 'truth and freedom' that should 'reign supreme over what is left of the land? ' And, pray tell, what is 'holy basil'? The poem seems to ramble over much terrain so that although one would hope to glean from it, one does get lost. Adeline

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Zubyre Parvez 18 February 2011

Nice, snappy poem assisted by alliteration and rhythms contrasting with traditional, contemplation evoking subject matter. nice poem.

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Golaka Acharya 28 November 2010

Don't we go beyond all reality and live in that soul sanctuary.

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Subbaraman N V 28 November 2010

Nice. Thanks for sharing.

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John Oconnell 14 November 2010

The title of the poem draws the reader in and this finely penned poem holds the reader a willing captive to the very last line. A lovely smooth flow to this well expressed poem! Tfs.............

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